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Reviews For: Why We Leave
ZiggyGurl 2004-07-31 . chapter 1
I was looking through your work and I hadn't reviewed on this so I had to review! It was really good, once again. I think this one is among my favorites of your poems.
Fast Food Fantasy 2004-02-21 . chapter 1
We waste all our time.
Thinking hard, trying to find
The reason we got left behind.
Separate from those we want to see.
Love that stanza... Love the whole poem in general... definatly one of my favorites.
Haz Almighty 2003-08-25 . chapter 1
Hey is the one u sent me as an email? i think it is and its wicked ! yer i love this one best.
Kyalia 2003-08-12 . chapter 1
Love this one. Favorites list.
Only thing-- in a few places, the capitalization got confusing.
DreamNightmare 2003-08-10 . chapter 1
hm...its very interesting...i like 2 read ppls oppion bout god n how they feel...makes me realize im not the one 1 who thinks sumthings
Ebony Spiritess 2003-08-10 . chapter 1
Wow, this is interesting. Nice job
CaitSpain 2003-08-09 . chapter 1
There was something about this that didn't quite strike me. I think it could've been a little deeper maybe, and that line "Devil, Angel, God, or Demon" didn't click and make sense to me. But otherwise, the topic was an interesting one--it was something you don't often see in the lyrical genre. ^^ Keep writing!
VladimirsAngel 2003-08-09 . chapter 1
I'm not religious myself, but I really like the way this reads - I like the rhythm in my head. And you put your point across really well.
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