loved it

I would have prefered it if you wrote between the years, and the whole happy-family-sex was kind of odd. I like how Sedra was devistated by the fact that she couldn't charm someone.

It's better then most, but a little fast.That's okay, though, you've got your style. I really love the characters, and I have to say I really love a few of the lines you had. Really excellent. =3

Come on, don't mess with me, you NEED to update. I know it's been a while, but come on...*puppy dog eyes* This has a crap load of elements that I love, don't let it die o.o Please?

Are you going to update this. Please do it soon! I like this story.

v.good

It's marvelous. I really do like it and I am waiting for the next chapter.

i sorta like your story its interesting. please email me when u update!!

As far as incest goes, that was *very* mild, actually. When I saw the warning, I was ready for...well. Pronouns are fun things. I want to see more of this "guy" Sune. Seems like an interesting character. Yummy bed scenes.

One thing? I'm a bit confused about your use of "-sama." From what I can tell, this is by no means a Japanese-based society. So the suffix seems a bit out of place. *shrugs* It's not a big thing, just something I noticed.

I'm a bit confused about two things: One, Sarah's willingness to become Sedra at a moment's notice, and two, Will's relative compliance to the whole situation. Of course, I don't know the full history of either of them- sounds likle Sarah/Sedra had some repressed sexuality going on, and I'm not sure about Will. Anyway, íts fun to read, and I'm looking forward to hearing more about our deliciously wolfish Kaiyu.

I'm back and with more reviews. This one's only 2 chapters long. -_- More waiting for me... Oh well. If this is as good as the other one, then there should be no problems with me liking this one...

Chapter 1 : Whew. Already heavy on the SM relationship. [Slave/Master, no Sadomasochism(S&M)...] This should be fun. I'm glad it's on your priority list...

Will is going to be fun. Almost as fun as Simon from your other story, NLFM [Not Looking For a Miracle, if you even had an acronym for it...]

He called him an **. How appropriate... What time period is this, by the way? I can't really get Egyptian times out of my head... >_< I like this story though. By the time I'm done, I'll have read all of your stories, even the ones you won't probably ever finish. ::shakes fist:: Curse you!

Chapter 2 : Five years later. 0.o Damn. That was a really quick jump. Anyway, he did exactly what he said he would do, that Kaiyu, and Will did eactly what he said he'd never do. Ah well, we knew one of them would have to budge, and since it's you writing this story, we should have known anyway.

Now this General Sune Lee... Is he as sadistic as you say? He should be fun. ::grin:: I wonder how Sedra will try to charm him...

Cold hearted bastard. Three words that describe Sune Lee perfectly... I wonder. Does he even take pleasure in anything aside from pillaging?

Owari. Kageisuke. So sue me. My spelling sucks.

Sune's a virginal gay?! But I thought that Kaiyu said he was... *blushes* Never mind! But please update while I keep on reading your fic! *shows a hentai smile*

Except the fact that Will and Kiayu are "kinda" funny when they fight, so whne's the yuri? UPDATE!

O!! interesting fic! YEY!! Another fic for me to read!

*bounces and glomps Phae* SUGOI! I likied this chapter, though it was... somewhat... odd...
But anyways, you hafta continue!! *teary eyes* Pwease?

WOW~ awesome! Kaiyu is so totally hot! I don't like his father very much tho.. >.>;; He's very.. i donno.. bleh? ^^; Kaiyu's my favorite!