 Hyper-chan 2007-05-10 . chapter 1 This made me giggle. It really did. Want to go paint racists? |
 Barbados 2005-08-14 . chapter 1Masterful work. Especially with the use of purple, which not only fits the verse, but the theme. While the Purple Heart is now given to injured military (including those {and next of kin to those} injured by international acts of terrorism, such as 9/11,) it was originally issued by George Washington to heroes of the Revolutionary War, and was at the time called the Badge of Military Merrit. Just an interesting tidbit. |
 coffup 2005-05-16 . chapter 1I am flabbergasted. This is so cute! Purple? Purple? That is a stroke of genuis, my good Velvet. Amazingly funny, just like your other stuff. |
 chevere 2005-04-17 . chapter 1 yet another useless review, but I had to say it: I loved it! |
 Team-Claw 2005-03-16 . chapter 1 Heh. I expected such a twist at the end. |
 bookwormish 2004-08-26 . chapter 1haha... funny. You can be soo amusing some times.. I suppose I shall have to give you and orange soda or something...
~kitish |
 Anjeni Windsinger 2003-09-23 . chapter 1Lol, I loved the ending. You made a good point though. Very good work! |
 dreamer-to-the-core 2003-09-16 . chapter 1Aww that is so great! I love that and I wish it would work in real life. Great poem. |
 find-nowhere 2003-09-12 . chapter 1It's quite a shame that this won't work in this so-called reality which we abide in.
Purple is a nice color, by the way. |
 Tenika D 2003-08-13 . chapter 1Wonderful! The ending made me smile. ^-^ Once again, I commend you on your wonderful rythm. Well done.
Tenika Dargan |
 Nike the Wonder Goddess 2003-08-12 . chapter 1Lol. This sounds good in theory, but in the real world, it would never work... Nice poem. ^_^ |