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| Hyper-chan 2007-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis made me giggle. It really did. Want to go paint racists? |
| Barbados 2005-08-14 ch 1,  | abuseMasterful work. Especially with the use of purple, which not only fits the verse, but the theme. While the Purple Heart is now given to injured military (including those {and next of kin to those} injured by international acts of terrorism, such as 9/11,) it was originally issued by George Washington to heroes of the Revolutionary War, and was at the time called the Badge of Military Merrit. Just an interesting tidbit. |
| nishasha 2005-05-16 ch 1, | abuseI am flabbergasted. This is so cute! Purple? Purple? That is a stroke of genuis, my good Velvet. Amazingly funny, just like your other stuff. |
| chevere 2005-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseyet another useless review, but I had to say it: I loved it! |
| Team-Claw 2005-03-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseHeh. I expected such a twist at the end. |
| bookwormish 2004-08-26 ch 1, | abusehaha... funny. You can be soo amusing some times.. I suppose I shall have to give you and orange soda or something... ~kitish |
| Anjeni Windsinger 2003-09-23 ch 1, | abuseLol, I loved the ending. You made a good point though. Very good work! |
| dreamer-to-the-core 2003-09-16 ch 1, | abuseAww that is so great! I love that and I wish it would work in real life. Great poem. |
| find-nowhere 2003-09-12 ch 1, | abuseIt's quite a shame that this won't work in this so-called reality which we abide in. Purple is a nice color, by the way. |
| Tenika D 2003-08-13 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! The ending made me smile. ^-^ Once again, I commend you on your wonderful rythm. Well done. Tenika Dargan |
| Nike the Wonder Goddess 2003-08-12 ch 1, | abuseLol. This sounds good in theory, but in the real world, it would never work... Nice poem. ^_^ |