You have such a way with words! Darn you. This is not a good review... but well I liked it and ... darn you and your way with words!!
~kitish

Beautiful flow, wonderful rhymes. I must admit I clicked on this one 'cause my real name happens to be Raven. But anyway, brilliant work!

Awesome poem, great flow. Very interesting dream, by the way ;)

Jesus dude. you were like born to write poetry. you rule. i love al your poems.

Another excellent one! There's a very nice rythm to your work, and there are no words out of place. A lovely bit of writing. ;)
Tenika Dargan