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| Hyper-chan 2007-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat's actually kind of cool. Could someone get off like that? |
| nishasha 2005-05-16 ch 1,  | abuseAw, this is so cute. It reminds me of a little kid trying to get out of trouble, but failing miserably. Er... I know realize yet again why people think I'm twisted. My sense of humour needs some work. Tehe, sock drawer. |
| Eresteizulim 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abusewhoa...awesome poem...i can totally imagine people thinking this. fantastic. i love your poetry. xoxo LlaMa Rachel |
| bookwormish 2004-08-27 ch 1, | abusemelikes. once again i shall comment on how i love your twisty endings.. this poem is also hot, incase you were wondering. Loved it! ~kitish |
| Rose McFarleen 2004-06-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. I love it, I really do. Its so scrumpy its like... Edgar Allen Poe meets Roald Dahl. It has got to be my favourite...(until I read some more of your work... but its still probably going to stay up there) ^^ Rose |
| Tenika D 2003-10-13 ch 1, | abuseCreepy . . . but very good! When I first read this I was rather surprised, but I've never really minded horror poetry, so I found it very good. Per usual, your rhyming is excellent. Well done! Kudos for writing a wonderful piece. ^.^ |
| Anjeni Windsinger 2003-09-23 ch 1, | abuseI could just see those demons coming out. Another really good poem! |
| find-nowhere 2003-09-12 ch 1, | abuseAwesomeness. I liked this a lot. Darn those silly demons in your head. ^_^ |
| Marlah Singer 2003-08-16 ch 1, | abuseagain brilliant. like some anime i saw last night. |
| OJW 2003-08-11 ch 1, | abuseOH THIS WAS REALLY GOOD I LOVE HOW YOU ORGANIZE THIS POEM!! Its Really good, and it has good rhythm! |
| Traced In Green 2003-08-09 ch 1, | abuseUh...yeah...it gets kinda scary at the end. But I liked it! luvs Young'n'HopelessKid |
| emem 2003-08-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem! I love the rhythym and the rhyme scheme. Good job! -Emma |
| V. S. Black 2003-08-08 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh! I'm sorry, but I just found that so funny. *giggles* I could just picture some little kid saying all that, is all. Like, "O..dun let the bad monsters get me", and then the ending just... lol! I liked the way it flowed. Nice. |