That's actually kind of cool. Could someone get off like that?

Aw, this is so cute. It reminds me of a little kid trying to get out of trouble, but failing miserably. Er... I know realize yet again why people think I'm twisted. My sense of humour needs some work. Tehe, sock drawer.

whoa...awesome poem...i can totally imagine people thinking this. fantastic. i love your poetry.

xoxo LlaMa Rachel

melikes. once again i shall comment on how i love your twisty endings.. this poem is also hot, incase you were wondering. Loved it!
~kitish

Wow. I love it, I really do. Its so scrumpy its like... Edgar Allen Poe meets Roald Dahl. It has got to be my favourite...(until I read some more of your work... but its still probably going to stay up there) ^^
Rose

Creepy . . . but very good! When I first read this I was rather surprised, but I've never really minded horror poetry, so I found it very good. Per usual, your rhyming is excellent. Well done! Kudos for writing a wonderful piece. ^.^

I could just see those demons coming out. Another really good poem!

Awesomeness.
I liked this a lot.
Darn those silly demons in your head. ^_^

again brilliant. like some anime i saw last night.

OH THIS WAS REALLY GOOD
I LOVE HOW YOU ORGANIZE THIS POEM!!
Its Really good, and it has good rhythm!

Uh...yeah...it gets kinda scary at the end. But I liked it!
luvs
Young'n'HopelessKid

Great poem! I love the rhythym and the rhyme scheme. Good job!

-Emma

Oh my gosh! I'm sorry, but I just found that so funny. *giggles* I could just picture some little kid saying all that, is all. Like, "O..dun let the bad monsters get me", and then the ending just... lol! I liked the way it flowed. Nice.