That future is here now...it's sad really. We (our generation) never really got to experience the simplicity and beauty first seen in the mirror. Oh, well...we just keep moving on. I love this poem.

Really good. It's always refreshing to see a poet who puts effort into making things rhyme and not sound boring. It's a very sad story. I liked it.

That was hot. Damn you! You are making me wanna do bad things to a *poem*. I... wow... yeah...
~kitish

Oh wow. You're the (wo)man [since I am quite unsure of your gender...heh...and you seem to be too].
I liked this a lot. Very amusing.

Very nice. Once again, I can only compliment you on your rythme, which you maintained flawlessly, per usual. Congrats.
Tenika Dargan

Sort of shocking. But I liked the rythum and how it flowed. It ought to be marked agnst though.

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