I would like to say... that your words are very powerful... There isn't an image evoked, but a feeling. An empty nonexistence, yet there is a hopeful light in the after-ending.

Whoa. O_o Ok, check that...I think this is my favorite poem you've written so far. That last line..yeesh, wow. I love the way you organized everything, beginning the same and ending every stanza with a new insightful thought. This really does sound inspired. I can't think of anything to criticize, good job...O_o()

You should give this one a shot at publication. I really think this could get somewhere. It's truly a special piece of work. Serious kudos. ^__^

Wow... very umm moving... is that right? Hell, I like it.
~kitish

I really like this. It's beautiful and kind of sad.

Okay...
If my poetry and your poetry got into a fight, my poetry would run away scared before your poetry threw a punch because it would be frightened by the sheer stature of your poetry.
Your syllabic-ness is great, your rhyme is wonderful, the meaning is ** awesome.
Just...whoa...

*jaw drops*

HOLY HELL.

I have never, _never_ been this blown away by a poem. I'm speechless, the only thing I can think of is... well, all the usual words of praise.

Incredible.

Oh that was so good! I love it. Can I hang it my locker please? I gotta share this.

** Brilliant!

That was beautiful! the rhyming and flow of words were amazing! And the rhythm of this piece was good! I'm impressed.

Awesome! This was an exceptionally good poem, with one of the best rythms I've found so far. Very nice work, this is going on my favorites! Kind of makes me wonder what I'd like on my tomb . . . ;)
Tenika Dargan

O.O Wow. This poem is quite powerful. And it rhymes! That's always good. I loved these lines-
'Here lies Someone, buried deep
among the rocks and stones,
but still his mortal flesh remains.
It cannot leave his bones.'

Very stunning. I got a feel that 'Someone'didn'tquite do anything with his life. Eh, I apologize for the vague review, it's late.

Once again, wonderful poem.