Hey, it's me Kimmie3! (for some reason I am Kimmie6 on fp.com.. aw well). This was a wonderfully depressing poem! How do you write so well? I am so jealous of you! I think you've captured the angst extremely well. keep up the good work! I miss reviewing your stuff!

Kimmie

again, wow. Great imagery...I can feel that poem so much that it hurts.

this is really good :)

Do us a favor and write more!

hm...angsty...my fav genre. i really liked ur poem. i'll be waiting for more of ur work...

nikki... you're not really depressed, i hope and thinking about suicide...

cool poem... im not much of a critic, but i still say this one is good... very angsty...

(if you dont know who i am... figure it out... clue: trina happens to be second name... or just ask jin.)

That was soo good! I loved it! Write some more!

=+)Love Ya, Seishinseii

This reminds me of a friend. This is great! :)

Keep writing well,
~Naomi~