I love this Poem. You have a story to it (in a way; some people don't do that...). Keep writing you're doing a great job!

that was awesome. i loved it.

keep on writing and thanks a million for your review!!

great poem. sincerely Kashe

Very good...very simple and repetitive, which makes it speak all the louder...I like the very tentative air, I don't think I've read any poem yet that's got that right, and I've read and written my share of poetry for a hurting, falling angel.

That was creepy but, again, I'm a sucker for creepiness. Apart from this, I sensed an unspeakable sadness in it. And, needless to say, I loved every word of it.

Good work. And thanks for the reviews.

Aw!
Great images 'tears to acid', 'feathers in mud'- very original.
Everything seems so much worse because it's a 'Little Angel' that you're talking to and worried about.
Very strong- really well-written. Lyrics are pretty; to me it sounds like it would just be voice and piano, but I dunno...

Interesting poem. I liked the questioning throughout. It really aided with the flow of the poem. The repetition of Little Angel and the subtle rhyme scheme make's you wonder what the narrator's intentions are in questioning the Little Angel. Nicely done.

Sad as i am to say it. Im more of the person who tears the little angels down. i guess i apologize for that.

So you can't take criticism, well here's a little for you. Why don't you write some more, because this was really good. I don't know how it was intended to be played, but I came up with a soft little melody inside my head and the song was great. Top marks.

awe... this is so good, i love it, its very un-cleche abd original. i lov the parts hwere you go 'Little Angel' then something then 'Little Angel' you know, those parts. love this keep writing

fantastico! i love these kinds of poems! you portrayed everything so well, especially while repeatin little angel. keep up the great writing.^_^
ps. thanks for reviewing my poem!