I hate this. lol Not really but...well I hate it when something rings so true to my own life...here I am trying to get over and PAST something and then there this is...*sigh* anyways...my favorite parts were "and I’d save the last dance when there is no chance" and "tore holes in my heart / turned it to dust" Awesome, unique imagery.

Good poem, but not what I expected from your summary...

m pretty cool, i like your other songs better though. This one just didnt click with me. (maybe because im female lol)