|Reviews for Last Chance|
| i was a postcard 9/22/03 . chapter 1
This is really good, I really like this one. But what was really good was this whole part:
"Your playing with fire
your bound to get burned
And I don’t want to see you
when the tables have turned
You’ve still got a chance now
before fate has you found
and I don’t want to be there
when it comes crashing down"
I mean, every line was great. Rock on.
| avidelecteur 8/21/03 . chapter 1
Really good and flowing! VERY well written. I'm amazed.
| Enter The Coil 8/21/03 . chapter 1
wow! im so jealous, your so talented.I really liked the lines "Its all up to you, Dont become what he put you through."
That was quite...well relatable (is relatable a word? O.o) anywho, lovin all your stuff!