This is really good, I really like this one. But what was really good was this whole part:

"Your playing with fire

your bound to get burned

And I don’t want to see you

when the tables have turned

You’ve still got a chance now

before fate has you found

and I don’t want to be there

when it comes crashing down"

I mean, every line was great. Rock on.

Really good and flowing! VERY well written. I'm amazed.

wow! im so jealous, your so talented.I really liked the lines "Its all up to you, Dont become what he put you through."

That was quite...well relatable (is relatable a word? O.o) anywho, lovin all your stuff!