kick **! so you're good at rhyming?! excellent! keep writing, this was great!

ye gads! i wish i could write like you!

I absolutely love the first/last stanza. great job

wow... I can definately realte alot.. I love the feed me your lies like candy canes.. thats very cool!

totally FREAKING awesome!The rhyming was incredible! I LOVE IT! thanx for reviewing my poem, btw. I took your suggestion. Again, good job!
~Carissa~

M, I think we've all felt like that at one point in time or another where no one wants to admit or hear the sharpness of truth and reality. Where do you think euphemisms came from. Anyway, this is nice, insightful work, nice. ^.~

This is really good. I really liked it. I just started writing poetry and i was wondering if u could r/r some of my work.thanx

Wow. I love this idea, especially the "Sweet lullabies" part. Great work, keep it up!!

That's very true...some of us just can't to accept the truth.

Amazing poem. The way you worded everything with the rhyme scheme fits together really well. Keep writing

This is really interesting. An interesting take on people who live in their own word of lies.

I think that it might have just sounded better without the rhyming, although the vocabulary is still pretty good.

Thanks for reviewing my poem.

Stunning!Great work yet again Keeper.