Very well written. Interesting.

Love the story. Your style and sentence structure is excellent and bravo on the whole correct spelling and grammar thing. I think I shall have to read your other work now, I'm hooked. Good job. :)

That was rather good. It interests me that a lot of the same elements crop up in your serious and your parodic works.

Wow ... I guess there really is a thin line between Light and Dark ... and Shadow. But how could there be a line ~between~ three things? That's impossible ... unless one is referring to a 3-D universe, in which one line separates the three segments which are ... never mind. Too complicated. Good story.

A. Lee

So, the last Queen in that other story had a child? Interesting twist. I wonder if Glangon knew about it. The birth of Royal heirs is not something easy to conseal.

Of course, I liked the viper trick. Aren't snakes considered to be of the dark? Hm...

I hope there's more in it. Right?