A cliche on every line. Impressive.

Clever and amusing. I was never a huge fan of these types of poems, but they're fun to read sometimes. And cliches are always fun besides.
*^_^*
byrdgirl

Hey there... "floo" a.k.a insane floo pot... yeah for some random reason my review for this poem didn't record well all of the review so *sigh* I thought I'd try and review, well re-review , because it doesn't make sense where it's being cut off! Well I'm glad I did click on this poem because it's not only the summary that's funny! I mean not only are you the metaphor king but you're also really talented at funny stuff to! And it's not just because like in some cases people say it's funny because it's in the humour section but it's funny because it's well... funny, does that make sense lol! Such a totally fun and random poem but hey randomness is super, but not as super as your poem which means the poem is well double super! Eek gotta go, well until next time... See ya ^_^

Well now to be fair I only clicked the read button because you're summary is just so fab for this that I couldn't "every cliche has it's day"

clever use of double-meanings with the fruit names throughout. well written; i like

wack, cheery, imaginative, intelligent. hehe
sarah

*giggle* totally random. fun and clever.

That's so cute! Awesome! Fantastico!

this one really cute. its kindda whack but if i suppose its pretty much says it all in the context itself. its cool

Very clever. It reminds me of a book I was reading and the author would describe a girl as having "lips red as cherry and sweet as honey". Every cliché has it's day.

it cheers you up

lol. very different.

Pure...Utter...Genius.

*Snort* Haha! You must've been bored! But I like dis a lot.

~ckret2

lol. That's funny and cute. I also liked the format. Very clever.