...that was scary..i don't wanna ever insult someone like her... *Shivers* creepy lady... and i get stickers?!?! YAY!

thanks so much for clarifying the stories. i get so confused so easily.. it's the blonde genes...really! but.. please lemme know when next you've updated! thanks to you, my house wasn't clean when my friend came over for the night cuz i was too busy readin' bout Taymarua and Taren to clean!

ok, it was pretty good, but you have periods where you should have commas and capitalization where you should have lowercase. unless you're saying "Prince Frost" it shouldn't be capitalized, it's a lot like saying Mommy or Daddy. those are titles. titles are always capitalized. the Crown Prince of De Khiren.

sorry if some of this isn't making any sense to you or if i come off seeming kinda grumpy. i'm a little drugged up on Vicodin right now, so i'm apologizing ahead of time if i'm seeming to act rude in any of these reviews

i will continue to read more at a later date. until then...

an interesting start, it leaves at an intriguing spot. you have esablished quite a few characters but on many dont quite know their looks, also a few have a social status that is unknown. it would be nice to know what this dance/party thing is about...or maybe you explained that and i missed it? at any rate, a tiny bit more detail may be nice. other than that, a good start

~color outside the lines~