your a really good writer
i feel the same way bout my writing and i think its really important.
i also like the title passion but cause passion is a strong word. keep up the good ** man. peace out
recalcitrant

Adam, words cannot express the beauty I see in this poem. It seems very different in style than any of your others--and yet, at the same time, a connection is felt that seems to sum up everything and nothing all at once.

I think I can understand where you're coming from with this stanza:

So long as some depend on me,
Be it masses or just one,
I'll work 'till dead, but otherwise
Motivation have I none.

You seem to express what the rest of us have no words to say, and in doing so, you motivate us to achieve our goals, to further ambitions--in your own words,

"I want to live - not as the ash,
But as the roaring fire."

wow i reli love this, i think its amazing wot can can come from peoples minds... no matter of the subject!

i love the name, reli good for the subject.keep posting i want more from you lol.

the intellect
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