Very romantic twist and the end. It's really cute. ^_^ Great job!
~God bless~

I actually get that! Wow, what a clever way of emphasizing your point!

You're a really good poet!

thanks,
Lady E

I'm lost for words. You are, point blank, and amazing poet. I've only read a few of your poems so far, but i can already say that i admire you immensely. You have a talent for putting words together in just the right order to make them sound perfect. This is definitely going on my favorite stories list.

Beautifully written!

~*~AbunaiChikara

Firstly, you are a fantastic writer. Secondly, the repetition: brilliant, no doubt about it. Thirdly, you are a fantastic writer. Fourthly. I really enjoyed the final stanza. Fifthly, you are a fantastic writer.

Have I ever told you that you are a fantastic writer? Well, you are, and I'm always so thrilled to be given the privilege to read more of your marvelous work. :)

That was fine work I loved the examples you used. They added to the effectiveness of the piece.


~Heart of the Sword