I would love to see this painting. When I was reading your bio, it sounded incredibly like me. I am the same age, I write to express my feelings, I love music, and yes, I play the clarinet. Heehee. That's all besides the fact that I often use artsy-fartsy to describe my way of life. Anyways, great poem, you've been highly recommended and I see why. Keep up the great work and God bless you!

You describe it in such a way that I am seeing it. Every word was perfectly placed and I loved them all!

~*~AbunaiChikara

Oh, wow. I love this. Beautiful imagery, and it flows so well too! This poem is welcomed to my favorites list. :)

Certainly one of your more interesting and different works, to be sure. (And no, that's not a way of avoiding complimenting it.) Seeing as I have no experience in Nature poems, here's my less-than-professional commentary.

I really loved the feeling and serenity that this poem had intertwined into the fabric of the words. Also, the way you told a story in poetic form was well-done. The final two lines were excellent.

How was that? Helpful?

Useless? *Winks*

Awesome work. We had to study a Claude Monet painting last year for an academic comepetition. It was "The Four Trees".


~Heart of the Sword