Hello, This is Kosovka,
You reviewed my story "The Swamp" and I would like to say thank you for your feedback. I am an H. P. Lovecraft fan and Stephen King fan, but didn't intend to copy any of their writing. I love vampires as my bio states, and Anne Rice is one of my fav authors, so naturally I must extend my compliments on this one shot story. I will read your other stories when I get a chance as well. I absolutely love your writing style, and your vocab usage is amazing. Besides stories, I am a big fan of radio productions. I make my own in my spare time, and I was wondering if you wanted any of your stories adapted to radio production format. Incase you're not sure what they are, you can visit

to get samples of radio plays.
I also have my website for my podcast listed on my bio if you'd like to check out what I've done thus far.
You could also just drop me an email at

if you like
Love your stories!

my eyes change colour too.

Good job. I liked the detail in it. Although i have never read a full book of Anne Rice's from what i did read (twenty pages, man that stuff is hard!) this is probably better, i can understand it. (mean younger vampire readers can read something good istead of struggling to read something that is a blur) Great job.
I've got a vampire story to, feel free to check it out, great job! I loved the way you desricbed the part were she drank his blood, i could picture it, almost feel it.

*smiles* Well, if you meant to write like Anne Rice, you have certainly achieved your goal. I am a great fan of her Vampire Chronicles, have read them all, and this certaintly has her elegant style. I also enjoyed it thoroughly.

o... very interesting. :)

Imitating writers you like can be good practice but nothing more. Try to find your own voice.

This doesn't sound like Anne Rice at all.

The disclaimer that isn't needed first- Of course, you know me well enough, I haven't read anything by Anne Rice. So forgive me for my lack of "well it's very much like," or "not exactly like," comparisons.

On to the oneshot itself. It was like one of those things where I couldn't stop reading, even if I wanted to. Hell, while I was reading I was gonna eat a Milky Way, I had it in my hand, but put it down to not distract myself.

Of course, as it always seems, the imagery is amazing. I thought I was the one experiencing the "dark kiss."

So yeah, it's basically wowed me to a point where I've been lost in a trance. Where I've become completely quite and focused only on this. In other words, fabulous job.