congradulations, you don't get my you suck speal. I enjoyed your pome. It was good

Like always, I love it. If anyone on this site deserves to get a book of poems published, it would undoubtably be you

simply an incredible piece...

The words in this are absolutely amazing...So many different ideas - this is goddamned gorgeous.

Wow...that was SPECTACULAR..did I spell that right? Anyways..awesome freeverse!

Oh god.. well damn, ARENT YOU AMAZING, EDGAR ALLAN POE?

SIMPLY BRILLIANT! I'm STILL trying to figure it out!

Your talent never ceases to amaze me. You really have a way with words and imagery that allows the reader to actually visualize what is happening in the poem. Keep up the great poetry.

This is such a brillaint piece! Ever consider publishing them?

i reli like this one, briilaint description in it throughout...

i love this bit

'Faded shafts of celandines

Lesser shards of mirrored gold

Asleep upon her emptiness

Petals of a dimming nightlight's shadow'

the intellect

i have no idea what it means but the imagery is beautiful. esp the strawberry vines, how ever did u think of that?

Very well written, and very descriptive, which is somewhat rare on the site.

I was wondering when you were going to post another poem again. )

This more than makes up for it. This is some of the finest writing I've seen. Hope to read more from you soon!

All of your writing always amazes me. Keep it up.

Heart of the Sword