sounds like you were mad at someone in this one. but it made me think. sometimes people are that way. I also wanted to say thank you for inspiring to me to keep writing, even if no one ever reviews my work. what matters is I did my work, and I'm proud of you. You are an inspirational author, and I enjoy reading your phenomenal work. I hope you never stop writing

Wow. This is such a perfect description...just...wow.
-God bless-

that, is really good. whoa, all i can say, is really really good.

Oh my. Very haunting. You've captured the feeling of bitterness and guilt extremely well. Keep it comming!

I like the it...and yet I so understand it...it's hard to forgive yet it something we must do... I know... I know...

wow this was like you were talking directly to me...i am guilty of all you said...it would have been so much easier to just let go...great poem..**applause**

a great piece with such a powerful ending and a creative metaphor.

Great way to convey the message! I really like it, keep writing.

Wow...so powerful and passionate. I love your way of describing feelings.

Awesome poem!!

WOW. I really mean that. WOW!! This poem was so awesome! So detailed and fine. But the message, above all, was the best. I haven't read a poem this good in a long time. Do keep writing.

-Euro--=-

Another excellent poem. I love your style, it feels as though you are conversing with the reader. Nice work!

*tear*

Excellent poem. The metaphor you used was very clever. I'm sure many people can relate to this, and well done on illustrating how important forgiveness is. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

One word: wow. That is amazing!