|Reviews for Rusty Nail|
| dabeni21 4/30/04 . chapter 1
sounds like you were mad at someone in this one. but it made me think. sometimes people are that way. I also wanted to say thank you for inspiring to me to keep writing, even if no one ever reviews my work. what matters is I did my work, and I'm proud of you. You are an inspirational author, and I enjoy reading your phenomenal work. I hope you never stop writing
| Deana Bell 4/15/04 . chapter 1
Wow. This is such a perfect description...just...wow.
| lostrunner 1/22/04 . chapter 1
that, is really good. whoa, all i can say, is really really good.
| Modern Poet 12/30/03 . chapter 1
Oh my. Very haunting. You've captured the feeling of bitterness and guilt extremely well. Keep it comming!
| Flavor of Rain 9/21/03 . chapter 1
I like the it...and yet I so understand it...it's hard to forgive yet it something we must do... I know... I know...
| swirlygirl 9/7/03 . chapter 1
wow this was like you were talking directly to me...i am guilty of all you said...it would have been so much easier to just let go...great poem..**applause**
| soulspring 9/5/03 . chapter 1
a great piece with such a powerful ending and a creative metaphor.
| Anjeni Windsinger 8/24/03 . chapter 1
Great way to convey the message! I really like it, keep writing.
| Mime 8/21/03 . chapter 1
Wow...so powerful and passionate. I love your way of describing feelings.
| Ame perdue 8/19/03 . chapter 1
| unforeseen 8/15/03 . chapter 1
WOW. I really mean that. WOW! This poem was so awesome! So detailed and fine. But the message, above all, was the best. I haven't read a poem this good in a long time. Do keep writing.
| Andrea Christine 8/15/03 . chapter 1
Another excellent poem. I love your style, it feels as though you are conversing with the reader. Nice work!
| Fanfreak Mars 8/14/03 . chapter 1
| cosmo-queen 8/14/03 . chapter 1
Excellent poem. The metaphor you used was very clever. I'm sure many people can relate to this, and well done on illustrating how important forgiveness is. Keep writing :)
| Eternity's Secret 8/13/03 . chapter 1
One word: wow. That is amazing!