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| Drusilla1 2003-08-13 ch 1,   | Short Stores with Tragic Endings is one of my favourite songs so this really caught my attention. I like this poem; the only criticism I would have is that most of your lines give me the feeling that it should be rhyming, mostly because of the meter, but then, it doesn't rhyme, which can sometimes make the lines awkward. Generally if things don't rhyme the meter should be more offset, to make it more flowing. |