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| One Hard Core Cookie 2004-02-23 ch 2,   | cool and awesome |
| nina-101 2003-09-01 ch 2, | Not bad:) |
| carebear21 2003-08-24 ch 1, | very nice l like it! |
| Shades of Twilight 2003-08-23 ch 2, | hehehehe, very well done, except for it being so lamentably SHORT!! but that's okay, the chap helped us get to get the characters better. I cant wait to see what you have in store for them, update soon! //Shades\\ |
| jma 2003-08-23 ch 2, | more! pwease! |
| Nieni Springs 2003-08-23 ch 2, | Nieni: it's only ben two chapters, but I'm thinking I like the story. Nite: *dancing* Nieni: ^-^ I hopes you update soonz! |
| Atrimis Legnacra 2003-08-13 ch 1, | ::huggles:: It's a nice opening Ash. perhaps a title that acomidates what obsticals they may encounter? I got nothing. Anyways, Keep up the good work! |
| Slim 2003-08-11 ch 1, | School. Dammit, don't speak that evil word! -.-; *is depressed* Nice story so far.. Lots of characters. XD Ye better update. |
| jma 2003-08-10 ch 1, | Looks to be the beginning of a rather humorous story...o...0_o...Tyler and Jesse are gonna be a couple right?...*drools over Luke*...sounds so sexy...and Gabe well...i have always had a thing for red heads^_^ Please update soon! jma |
| Shades of Twilight 2003-08-10 ch 1, | I'm liking this! gah, your characters are very cool, they're different enough that they're interesting, but they're not over done. they're just perfect, perectly balanced. I love tyler esspecially! he's so cute and perky and . . . -dies- i'm in love ^_^ Anyway, your writting flows smoothly, it's really easy to get into. I await your update! //shades// |