Awesome! You should join this website .. it's perfect for the nature of your poems:

http://groups.msn.com/DarkShadowPoets

Wonderfully complex and it makes you think. loved it.

I really like this. It is hard to choose, but I'd have to say the part that my mind likes best is:

I am the forgotten past.
I am the unforgiving present.
I am the shining future.

and the line:

I am everything that was never seen.