LOVE THE ENDING! 'go to hell,huh?' Is this poem dedicated to someone?..
neway, bout the poem, its fresh, and i love the way you write it. i love ur style. so, keep writing

*nods*...well...your poems always show a great display of emotions, which is really great...i love angst poems. Dunno wat to sday anymore tho, very good. lvoe and good luck, Mia

This poem, hmm, it runs a different race compared to what I compete in my life. I've always believed in giving all you have to those in need and yes , putting aside all you know and all you could care about yourself for another.
But I have learnt hard, that it's not worth it.
However, the lesson that thought me much, I can't regard to my stubborn nature.
This poem should be advice to all those good samaritans.
It just isn't worth it sometimes.
Thought-provoking.

Hello Chris! Trying to find my oral piece. You said we should just review? Sure!

Btw, was the g2h meant for me? Honestly, if you have something to say about me, you can just say it. To my face and then write a poem about it but i suppose you can always go the spur of the moment kinda things.

Anyways i think its a nice piece.

OOps, my cat baru jatuh dalam tong sampah. G2g!

Accented with angst and brutality. I adore it, love. It was well worth my dramatic recital