 Post 2003-08-11 . chapter 1 I guess the nature of this poem is for anyone's guess.
I know it means a lot to you, and perhaps only you
can describe it in detail.
I imagine it describes either a physical condition
being dealt with as a side effect of being alive, or
an emotional state that is caused by perserverence.
One line I like is:
"My chest falling
Into
My stomach where
It pools "
It's such awesome imagery. I'm envious. ^_^ |
 Molotov 2003-08-10 . chapter 1I liked the rhyme of this, although it gets kinda screwy towards the end.
I honestly don't know what this is about, if it's something more than the obvious - the pain and suffering that goes along with living your life.
Good stuff, as always.
You're much better than me, but I still love you, even if I'm full of embroiled jealously. |