As I seem to sound like a repeating record, let me swithc up my methods of praise.

Jolly-good show, mate. Smashing good literay piece.

Heh.

Cheers.

This must have taken time to work on indeed. It feels
like everything you wrote was chiseled down into the
perfection that it is.

At the end of the second stanza, I get a feeling that
the whole work is a bitter invitation of sorts.

Nicely done. ^_^