Wow. You have so much talent. You continue to amaze me. I wish I could hear it with music- you must have spent forever on this. It's just so perfectly crafted and wonderful! It's not fair.

:: cries ::

damn...that was good!

oh...a very touching piece of writing. it's good, really well done. it's a subject that everyone tries to tackle in a song, but they almost always sound the same. yours sort of does, but it's above the rest.

A very expressive and honest peice. Nice job

Jess