lol, see, i invented the character without the name first, and then when i was done she reminded me so much of maggie that i just named her after maggie. she wasn't intended to be THAT maggie, but i guess she kinda turned into it.

maggie was a hadcore romantic... heh. *not going to say anything else* *but you might know of the two directions my comments would take...* anyway, i liked the story...

I think that this is very well written. Keep it up.

I like the first chapter so far. So you keep writing and I'llkeep reviewing.