Found you through Darren, nice guy. I chose to review this one because you posted it on my 16th birthday... anyway. Very nice, I like it a lot. I like slightly detached lines. You don't really have to read any of mine. I'm kind of... retired. :)

Great job, very good

Very kewl...dragons are nice. I can't decide between vampires and dragons...evil, or beautiful fire carriers? You decide. ~Starlight/Beckie

Great description on this poem, I've always loved dragons but I rarely see them in any piece written here, good job!