I'm sorry, but I have to agree with the DA. Defense attorneys are primarily what give lawyers a bad name. Personally I think they're all arrogant jackasses.

Loved your story though! Your writing style is excellent, and I love the depth of your characters!

Keep up the good job!

You're dialogue is good, and the storyline is a good and well-thought out idea, may I suggest though? More action. Show what the character is doing, how they feel, etc rather than telling it through dialogue in every sentence.

Awesome story! I really like it so far. I hope you continue to update. It sounds like its going to be fun. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work. You rock!

This story is really good. But question, dont trials normally take a while to come up, maybe the trila should b like two cahpters away, and the next chapter should b the date lol/. I think that joe and beth should show up on teh date, like he followed her to make hre jealous, itd b cute! lol but im sure u alreayd hav a great idea
~Colleen

This is really good! it's the first story ive read at this site, but i like it alot, i also love romance so i hope that she and joe become one of those love you/hate you thigns lol

Nice story. It's really cute. I tried to review before, but it di dnot work. I like Olivia, she is really down to Earth and Matt is somewhat developed. I want to see what happens so please continue! Also can you review my fics? Thanks. Keep writing

i just found this fic and i have a feeling it's just going to get better! keep up the good work and please come and review my fic when you get a chance, thanks
Kris

Awesome story! I love it, and I can't wait to read more!

I like this. Jay vs. Joe? Just the one thing, the two 'J' names are pretty complicating (to someone like me).
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Update soon!

This is so exciting! An update after about forever. Anyways, this got even more exciting when another guy was introduced. This is getting really good.

Cool story, would like to more arguements and friction between Joe and olivia though.

okay...just read the last chapter. uh huh...sure they won't answer why. the first step's always the hardest. so they go swimming on their first date...most people opt for dinner and a movie or something, but okay, if that's what they want. he's sweet to play baseball with ethan.

update asap

Not bad, I like it. I'm a little confused about the whole Joe/ lawyer thing. Isn't he helping her on the case? So why was he all "Ur his attorney, not me." Strangely, his personality doesn't seem to fit one of a lawyer's. Perhaps we'll get to see him in action in court, fun! I dunno but great work.

hey, nice chapter.
the part at which olivia goes "don you want to know why, blah blah play little league with ethan since he doesnt have a father" part, i was thinking that you had her blurt it out too quickly.
which brings me to "don"? did you mean do, or don't?
anyways, great chapter, update soon!

great chapter. joe sounds kinda freaky. update soon!