Love this story.
You're both amazing writers :)Though I'm sure you know this due to your countless reviews =)

Very good read for sure. Lovely twists in it and beautifully written all together. I found the ending a little... rushed perhaps. I dunno, it almost seems unfinished. But that would be the way it was supposed to be. Anyway, great writing and keep it up!!
Peachez ^_~

EVIL!! Evil people! Very cruel place to stop, but it fits. *Sighs in defeat* Anyway, good chappie, on the next ones...
Peachez ^_~

Nice chappie, Beautifully done story so far. Love the relationships between all the characters.

Peachez ^_~

hey so first of all that was THE cutest story i have ever read. i really liked how things were so perfect in the beginning and then the reader was made to believe things couldnt possibly get better but then they did. it took me a while to read because it was soo gloriously long but i loved every second of it. i have two criticisms that i want to share though. one is simply that i wish you would have shown more of how lars and stone's relationship started to blossom again besides their second, first kiss. also in the epilogue you mention that destiny is playing out but you dont specifically say how lars and stone are doing besides they go to the same school...i would love elaboration or maybe a sequen *wink wink* (psst...mb the devil wasnt done with them...and then maybe lars will get his memory back if only temporarily...DO IT!) heheh...the only other thing i want to say is that some of the dialog was EXTREMELY confusing...i understand that there is one person editing the whole time but when you have lars and stone go back and forth sometimes i get lost with who is saying what. an easy solution to this would be to make all the narrators thoughts itallicized (sp) or at least make it that way during conversations...i hope that made sense, if not please feel free to message me and i'll try to explain better. again i LOVE LOVE LOVED the story and i really hope there will be more because i love stone and i love lars! also as a little aside, i respect both of you as writers and would really appreciate it if one or both of you could read and review the story i have up so far. thanks!


~Heather

Alrighty, how do I start this...

First: AWESOME MUCH!

I'll stop... I'm hyper... I ate popcorn... Heh heh... I loved the whole plot and everything. (I almost wrote plop, lol) And I loved the author's notes! They were hilarious! And I must say, I have my own army of... What was it again... Ah yes, Pink Fluffy Ebil Bunnies...

Heh... Hopeless much? Not really...

Talk to me? You may. I think I'll have some fun... My email is on my homepage. I do have AIM but... I don't have it on my computor nor the one I'm at during the year... Anyways... I had fun reading this story! I make all my other friends read the stories I adore... Alright... I took up enough of your time.

Tootles!!

me loved it...*eyes shine in happiness* anything to do with vamps id hot by me*drools* VAMPIRES ROCK MY SOCKS...lol(don't ask...insiders) anyway keep up the good work u 2...t^^

ah, sorry I posted the earlier reveiw on the wrong webpage, I had your story up to read next and accidently posted the review on the wrong page. Sorry.

Wow, a lot of these seem a little freaky I will try to email my personal freaky story latter. You will find though that the only people that read these are the kind like me who have had simular experiances and sympathise with the authors, and the close minded idoits that well probable flame you. Every author has done a great job puting their stories out there.

goth is hot. I just had to say that first, because being the freak that I am, I think that almost every real (note the real) goth guy I meet is hot. unfortunately, thsats very few people. anyway, i love the characters, mainly because I find people that act like ** hilarious. I am THE Shadow, Caryn

this is nice..

Well... Teresa gave me the typed up copy of this. I read the first 2 chapters and I got kinda busy, so 4 months later I continued the book... I read like 21 chapters in one night. I couldn't put it down! I raved about this to Teresa and Victoria for a LONG time. I love(d) it! I highly recommend reading it... I'd like a sequal but I understand that sequals sometimes kill stories! Awesome job guys!

I loved it.

I need to point out something. Actually, I want to ask something. Were you two wanting this story to be...serious, I guess...? If that IS the case, your tone is too sarcastic. It makes it seem as if this story was written on a whim and you didn't put much thought into it. I know you are awesome authors, but I just thought it'd be nice if you clarified the tone of this story...

This story is probably the best that I've read on here. I can't wait to read more.