Hey! You've gotten kind of angsty! WHAT IS THIS WORLD COMING TO! oh well! lots of lovely (well...) poetry comes out of all this angsty-ness! WONDERFUL PEICE!

Savannah

Very good.

It's very dark, and I enjoy the tempo and note that the end of each line hits. Very nice work, I especially like the 2nd to last line.

This was interesting. I liked it. Also, I love all of your poetry. You do so good. This stuff is amazing! I mean it! You deserve praise!

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

Wow... very good poem. Very descriptive. In some cases it's kinda creepy, but this was really good. I loved the last line. Actually I liked the last two lines. Very good poem!

Keep writing

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