yes! this is great! I love it!

*the Solid Gold Buddhist Raccoon

i really love this poem its going on my favs list great work!

"[...] and being alone is the best way to be, cause when you're by yourself nobody else can say goodbye"

Very true, but is a life lived alone, really a life? I still haven't figured that one out. Can you be happy on your own? Can you stand, or even stumble, if there's no one there but you?

Of course, when you fall, you need someone to pick you up again, if you're a giant tourtoise anyway I guess.

A very good concept.

And i liked the way the word "fall" fell from the sentence.

I thought that that was very clever.

Leave me a review sometime?

True. Awesome work and it was cool how you presented two possible sides.

Heart of the Sword

*claps* just bitter enough for my taste :D though people tend to give you those funny looks when you explain that idea to them!

o_o wow... that's a really good poem!