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| Espirit Libre Butterfly 2006-11-28 ch 19, | abusehey, I know its been almost 3 years since you completed this story but I wanted to tell you "Great Job". It's good to know that even in horrible situations and times in our lives true love can be found. It gives me hope, hopefully I'll find a great guy like Eric someday, especially with the whole protectivness(what girl doesn't want a guy that loves her so much that he won't let anything or anyone hurt her). I wish Bree and Eric a life full of happiness and love. You also, and keep writing!:) ~Kate |
| cutepixieeys 2004-12-19 ch 19, anon. | abuseOMG! That was an awsome story!I was originally confused, cause I read ur story called Sasha and Cedric, and I was all, Why can't this girl come up with different names? And then u said u were Sasha, and then I was REALLY confused. But I just attributed that the other story couldn't be true, so whatever... Anyways... I think that is is soo awsome that Eric took Bree in, I mean that's just such a blessing 4 her! Although I don't agre with the whole sleeping-in-the-same-bed thing, it's not my life, it's theirs. I think that it is totally cool that they plan to get married! I also admire the fact that u and her can play B-ball, cause i sure can't. I'm good at passing the ball, and that's about it. That's why I play other sports like Volleyball and softball. Ok enough about me. I was wondering: are Eric and Cedric wealthy, cause Eric had his own apartment, and then he bought a house! He wasn't even out of high school! Whatever, i was just being a little nosy. OK. I love ur stories! Eventhough this one is true, it's stiil great! Tell Bree I'm happy 4 her and Eric, good luck, And I'll pray 4 them!Again, awesome job! Keep up the great work!! ~cpeP.S. Ideas for another story: mabye you could write a story about a foreign exchange student. Stupid idea, but if u can make something out of it, go ahead! As u can see, I don't write, I read everyone else's wonderful creations. So good luck on ur next story! I you want, plz e-mail me. No junk mail, though por favor :) |
| kt in the sky 2004-08-07 ch 19, | abusehey! this is a great story (i havnt read all of it yet, but i will) it's so sad that it's true but i hope it ends happily. :-P it was a good idea to write this story. i really am enjoying it. -Kashe |
| Wolf-Demon-Lord 2004-07-07 ch 19, | abusewhats up with you and your sis yall have a knack for bad guys also all your stories flow too easy to me from an imagination tey com from life experience please explain that too me |
| Ranting Forever n Rambling ... 2004-06-30 ch 4, | abuseAw, Eric's such a nice guy...^_^ |
| Ranting Forever n Rambling ... 2004-06-30 ch 1, | abuseoh my gosh...poor Bree...T_T This is depressing, a fourteen year old working at that kind of a job... I'm ranting again, but it's alright. But... that's so sad... |
| Sprkles620 2004-06-18 ch 19, | abuseyou should write another story kinda like this one but a different situationm, like a teacher ans a student having a relationship or somethin along those lines. ya knwo what i mean! |
| artistgirl727 2004-06-06 ch 19, | abuseThis is such a great story! I love it and I knew it would have a good ending! Lol. Anyway, I really don't have any ideas for you (sorry!), but I have really good ones for stories I want to write. Lol. Maybe a story with ghosts!! Hehehe. I'm a ghost believer. Will you please read my story and please tell me what you think. Thanks! Oh, keep on writing! |
| pneumothorax 2004-05-07 ch 13, | abuserandom.. |
| pneumothorax 2004-05-07 ch 11, | abuseoh. ok, i thought he was really old or something. how come he has his own house at that age? some things make me think it's not treu .. although it could be. It doesn't really matter either way. |
| pneumothorax 2004-05-07 ch 8, | abuseIt's interesting, a bit random and I find i quite disbelievable that she's 14. I mean that she's 14 and he took her in. Anyhow. |
| FamousOneLiners 2004-04-05 ch 19, | abuseThis is a great and inspirational story! |
| Marilda24 2004-03-21 ch 19, anon. | abuseAw...That is such a good real life story ^_^ I'm happy for them all^_^. lol ^^ Congragulations on everything!! Thier life was like a romance story come ture in real life ^.^ ho ho ^_^ I think it's pretty cool. I like Amanda's gang^_^ I think that really cool also. Ihope everyone is fairing well and everyone has a good time at the wedding XD lol^^ Sending everyone my best reguards and happiness for you all. ^_^ |
| Marilda24 2004-03-21 ch 13, anon. | abuse!! Cool!^_^ Their getting married?!! Please tell us when that happens alrights? ^^ ::smiles:: And send them my best regaurds! |
| Marilda24 2004-03-20 ch 10, anon. | abuseomg! ::gaps:: lol^^ I must hve missed his birthday ^^;; well Happy B-day Eric and thank-you for everything you've done for Eree!! ^__^ And you too also BreeJalil ^^ I can't belive this is actually a real story and it's so good too ^.^ ::smiles:: |