I also love vampire stories. I'll also agree with the previous reviewer and say that you should put or should have put the prolouge and chapter 1 under different sections.

I don't think that the chapter ended abruptly, but it does leave me wondering what's coming up next. So, good job. You're a good writer telling a good story. Hope that you update soon!

Oh, very nice, I love vampire stories. You're a very good writer - at times the pacing seemed a bit choppy, but other than that I'm very impressed. Just a few suggestions: Try putting the prologue and "Chapter 1" under two different sections, it just sort of caught me off guard. The chapter stopped a bit abruptly, I mean it's an interesting place to leave a cliff hanger. Other than that, I salute you!