It's great that you can rhyme like that. I can do it, so I respect you ;P!

Which Ones have You Read?

O!! I likes this! ^_^ Very nice; it rhymes and has a nice beat as well as the imagery! There was hardly anything to describe, but you could feel the love between the two, their doubts as well as the hot nights! ^_~ Dude, so KUTGW and write some more!!

A very well written poem, thought some general changes could be made. Keep up the good work.

~Fista of Tiadome