Okay so ive read and re-read most of your stuff and my i still think its all awesome, Dude you can make it somewhere, people would kill to be able to write like you can, and i am one of those people. but remember, im your stalker and i only kill cereal and drink cherry coke. Awesome stuff man.

I've reviewed for a couple of your stories/poems/songs before. This one was really good. I like your work.

Wow, i love this... it would make an amazing song... :-D

Wow. I'd say that would fall under the catergory of a song. Good job!

Yeah, I'd say it's a song. I like.

this is gd, i got a bit confused but then i read it a few more times and its gd, but i dunno if its a poem or song either lol. well done though!

i think its ur best so far lol...even if u dont think so :P
DreamNightmare

I love the line 'What you demand, demands sacrifice'
Great song...the idea is awesome sauce.
>winged one

Very nice. A refreshingly unusual format. Has a good rhythm and good wording.

whaddaya mean that i won't like it? well, I LOVE it! the time it takes, doesn't matter, but what matters is, if the time was worth it! take it from me... i write songs for my garage band... you are great!

that was great, i'd love to hear it performed, great poem