 evm 2003-09-03 . chapter 1Oh my god...get happy soon or else! Did something happen? Okay, I'll stop now...you probably get this all the time, and I know I hate it when people do that to me. Good poem! I love the end, it breaks the form of the rest of the poem, and stands out,making it a good conclusion. Really nice work here!
-Amberose
Think it's going on my favorites list! |