i liked this. just change the name, it degrades the poem a bit. makes it sound like one of those cheap, happy, 'nature is so beautiful' poems.

This was great, Noise. Keep it up!

Snipe

I liked it but...it seems a bit random, i dont know maybe its just me being picky, or just thick. I just got a bit confused every now and then. Oh well, dont take it to heart.

Good job.

Glastonbury