Very beautiful. I can feel what you feel when I read that and I know how hard it is to go through. Don't give up though. If it is meant to be, then he will come back, but do not cry tears for those whom cannot see them.

Very good, makes me want to cry. I love the line "Crying through his own pain" very nice.

I can tell you put your whole heart into this. Your writing techniques are very well done with this! It's a beautiful angsty.. love poem. Sad to see that a lot of people's love poems on here are not about the happy times :( but you've put "happy memories" into your poems which is why I like your material, because it doesn't always focus on the negative outlook. So, very well done :)

*Jenna*

I love it!! Really great stuff, the last few lines are amazing. *mock horror* No vampires? ;p

Hey, this is pretty nice work! I almost always have a hard time basing my writing off what happens to me, but after talking to you, you seem to do it quite well! Excellent Sam!

That was lovely! At first it was sad, and then you left it with a ray of hope at the end. Perfect! I got chills when I read it. I've felt like that before, too. Beautiful! Keep writing!