FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| PainKiller 2003-09-06 ch 1,   | One thing I can't get over is your word choice... how do you come up with it. It's amazing; unbelievably powerful. "Consider the supreme retaliation, to a deserving world addressing with spite" is one of those instances where I just let my jaw drop and I gape longingly for your abilities. Keep up the fantastic writing. |
| soulspring 2003-09-05 ch 1, | excellent word choice... i love it! |
| Seras Nova 2003-09-04 ch 1, | I love the words you chose for this poem. Again another author who has reminded me I need a new vocabulary. -Seras |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-09-01 ch 1, | Wow...wow. Amazing poetry. My only thing with it was that in the second line, I think "whose" would fit better than "who's"...but still. Incredible. I love. |
| True Illusion 2003-08-17 ch 1, | Neat. Indeed, hate only brings about destruction. *gasps* I did that?! *hides red face* OOps. I don't know entirely why I made that assumption, I'm sorry. I would've replied to your e-mail but e-mail's screwed up right now and I don't have an alternate that works. Anyways, I apologize, I changed it. Great job on the poem, btw. *sweatdrop* |
| Cyanotok 2003-08-15 ch 1, | Hmm, I think that in that fourth stanza, "glory" would fit much better than "galore", but that's just my literary opinion. Other than that, interesting imagery, but, other than the syntax of the piece, I could not really find a connecting thread. Then again, maybe that's what you were shooting for, in which case you succeeded. Or, I'm just missing something. Either way, good piece. Keep writing. |
| Deadwind 2003-08-15 ch 1, | Wow, great job! Or should I say awesome job...cuz it's that good! |
| Granite Claws 2003-08-15 ch 1, | Deep. Real deep. |
| Lieschen 2003-08-15 ch 1, | Too bad there isn't a "Masterpiece" section in here, because this poem just doesn't fit into "General". Utterly fantastic. ELise |
| Needa S 2003-08-14 ch 1, | Great job putting this together.. Awesome piece..Thanks for your reviews.. |
| obsidian katana 2003-08-13 ch 1, | awesome poem! wonderfully written, so meaningful and deep. i like it. great job! keep on writing! |
| Crucified Sanctity 2003-08-13 ch 1, | Interesting... You are a true poet. You have the views which you convey so well and you find the poetic terms to automatically decide something. I raise my glass to you - Crucified Sanctity - |
| without the sun im silent 2003-08-12 ch 1, | I love the way you express yourself. ood job |