man that was class.

nvr read a poem like that

nice one chris

Hey, lol, thats really good, made me laugh, and it's original, hardly anyone is gonna write about how they are eager to get the chair, lol, great job! gtg read some other stuff u wrote, lol. Love and good luck, Mia

You should change the title to Can't Hardly Wait..=P I bet it'll suit this one even more..haha..

lol!! i really enjoyed this poem!! keep up the good work!! hope u keep adding to it!!

this poem was really good.

i think you have tallent and i think you should carry on. you stories a good also!

i am the man who you are not but dont worry your prettie little head i am the king of the painins

That's most definately different. Interesting. Anger all mixed up in humour with a hint of the surrealistic too. Good, good.

such a nice poem! I really like it!
Nice time tech. keep writting!

this is a real pice of genius! you are the man! you are da man!

monkey loves cheese! im nuts kill kill kill the cat who stole my hat i will eat it for dinner with her!

again i bowl toy you genius! you aRE my king you fool! ha ha ha ha ha