whoa! like it, full of lots of anger. damn, i like angry poems. does this go for someone or did u jus write it?

Whoa, sweet! *-*
That...kicked...**! *-*
I do know the feeling as well...trust me. Well-done, dude!

Oh my god... do you like... know how powerful that poem is? Fantastic job.

Keep writing,
~Naomi~

WOW...intense..blood curdling stuff. Great job. *shivers* I can only count a few times when I've been as mad as that...to want to do something like that...very few. *watches the goosebumps prickly all over her skin*

Ok, I liked that. But again you know what kind of a reader (and a writer) I am ;)

Vivid descriptions, angsty language, it was certainly powerful.

Good poem. I like it. You did do a good job! :)

that was one wicked poem man! i've never read nething like this before...i agree, u did do a good job on it...lol. *two thumbs up*

=D wee! *dances in blood*