 aurias 2004-01-25 . chapter 1How true!
"What you see is not what you get.
You shake hand with me but one's all you get."
You have captured the essence of what some people may feel. At least I know that I'm not the only one who feels this way. Wonderfully written. :) |
 Fuu Hououji1 2003-10-04 . chapter 1I know. I feel. |
 amharte 2003-09-17 . chapter 1i liked that... sometimes i feel like that too, like no one knows the real me. or maybe i'm just weird, ne? ^_^
do you write any fanfics? |
 PheonixSlayer 2003-08-20 . chapter 1cool... i love the opening stanza. keep it up. |
 Keeper of the Key 2003-08-13 . chapter 1Great poem! I love the line 'You shake hands with one But one's all you met.' Nice job. |
 superfufu 2003-08-13 . chapter 1woah that was cool O_o nice one... i used to be one person, two persons for a short while, and i became the other after some time (friendly, angsty schizophrenic speaking)^_^ keep it up up up up |