...i dont get it, is lucifer her gardian anglel? Or her dad?

Yay evil stepfather gets hurt, he deserves it.


P.S. Cool Pename

Yay, I'll try and review each chapter becuse reviews are nice to give. Usually I just give one on the first and last.

That sucks about their stepdad, he seems like a jerk.

Lucifer is such a cool name, it sucks though becuse you cant name your kids it without peaple thinking your crazy ^.^


Great first chapter, this might go on my faverits list.

are you nuts?!?!? ending it there! ... i love it. great part to end at. can't wait to read more. good job.

That's a dirty trick,lol. It's good, but also kinda rude to keep people hanging like that,lol. Anyway, can't wait to read more.

Riona

I thought Lucifer had eight wings, because before he became a fallen angel, he was a seraph, God's right hand, and seraphs have eight wings. Oh well, I'm not Christian so I wouldn't know that very well. Nice story, you got me interested.

OO! Really good story so far!! I hope Ana and Lucifer get together!!

You call this... THE END OF THE BOOK?!?!?!?! You can't leave it THERE! People would seriously hound your butt if it was published and you left it there without resolving anything! Mean! You had better get your butt onto the next book or I'll be sad! Ganbatte ne! Ja! ^-^

EVIL! you can't end the entire STORY on a cliffie! that's just cruel...
::debates on sending a lightning bolt YOUR way...:: lol
aww you know i love ya!
great story though lovey...

That was really good I can't wait for the second book to come out keep up the excellant work. Can't wait!

Another chapter down! Seems like this is winding to a close? Mike can't die!! ::clings:: And while I'm on that, I'll be very depressed if Ana dies too! ::nods to self:: I liked the way you described Anael getting her wings. Very nice! Write more soon! Ganbatte ne! Ja! ^-^

Wholly hell kayla that was the **!! That and you put satan's pov classic!! Two thumbs up chicka!!

Whoo-hoo go Anael to the rescue or at least I hope so. I still feel a little pity for Saten (the good side) though can't wait to read the next update keep up the good work.

wow... there's more here than meets the eye... is lu still trying to save her from within himself? man... impressive chappie chica...