 ugly pop 2006-03-26 . chapter 1 some one has too much time on their hands...good job tho? |
 jon 2005-05-22 . chapter 1 well that made perfect sense to me loltypical of me to be different...
but one thing u forget is to mention is the main customers that keep the great mc donalds tradidtion alive.
ALL HAIL CHAV SCUM!
for kepeing the great mc donalds on this earth for all to enjoy and puke up on
nice one lucifer |
 Starlight Maiden 2003-08-15 . chapter 1WOT? That is nuts! I love it! I'm in the process of writing one called Hamburger but its not as crazy, just a little more brutal. Hahaha...omg...that is a great story, luv it. |
 MaD MoNkEy lOvEr 2003-08-14 . chapter 1i love this story! and i love the way im in your stor as a space ship. i wash i was a space ship then i would fly out in to space at the speed of light and make a noise like this m m brum cheese m monkeyit would be so fun!
who is tony and why do you mention him so much? who? who? who? who?
is he a monkey? |
 Forest Passant 2003-08-13 . chapter 1wow. that is really confusing. funny, but confusing. |