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| Naja Copperleaf 2003-11-15 ch 1, | Oh, the beauty of rain. Very good. ;) |
| Superchook-b-2000 2003-09-11 ch 1, | This is a very refreshing and imaginative poem. You seem to have a very good rhythm in your poems. :) |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-09-10 ch 1, | I love rain poems in general...this one has a twist to it in that it's a *midnight* rain. Oh, god, I need to go to bed. Good poetry. Je l'aime. Et i fait faut poir moi dormir parce que j'ai besoin de presente une poeme demain en la classe de francais... *realizes she's talking in french* er...ok, then. |
| loz 2003-09-04 ch 1, | Brilliant.This made me smile to myself( which looked kinda psychotic at college but what the hey). I seriously liked the whole poem. Brilliant. (just gotta start as i finish-another pyschotic mannerism)x |
| Tetrabolic 2003-08-14 ch 1, | "And I'm blissfully free, Though completely insane." - that right there is the hightlight for me. Well written |
| Magpie Poet 2003-08-13 ch 1, | cool. more peacefulness and rain :) with a bit of a twist. |
| tofujunky 2003-08-13 ch 1, | Oh man, that was beautiful. Such imagery! Loved it. |
| SerAnonima 2003-08-13 ch 1, | This is a cool poem! love the imagery you used to convey meaning...trully great! |