Very powerful, very moving. You weave the words together very well. Thank you for writing this piece and sharing it.

wow, thats absolutely gorgeous. it's so sensitively handled. It's usually quite hard to write abot death etc., it's too deep, but you got it right from the start. Congrats, that's a piece to be proud of!

It's so sad...

I like this story alot it is sad and painful but beautiful at the same time.

This is fantastic. My god, the poor girl. I can relate to her with the love of something. Not dancing, for me it is writing.
Peace
Velvet

My god! I love your story... is so... well, I can't describe it. But I felt like in a winter landscape... Keep writting... you are good at.