Today 2006 and this one dates from 2003...

It's been a while since you wrote this.

Still, I think it very good

even though I can see the improvement you made...

Both are you

(that sounded strange)

It is true I think

-love cannot be erased-

I wish it to be true...

sadly it can be (almost) forgotten.

I'm happy you still present us your works today -smile-

I liked the line "Dreams are nothing but intuition" - that could be a poem within itself.

AWESOME! Really good. great use of words!

*shivers* (Don't worry, the good kind of shivers!)
This is just really cool. "Love cannot be erased" is a really good line, and it's so true.

that was nice :) pretty and hopeful ;)
"dreams are nothing but intuition"

Beautiful...

I like how this one is structured, and the rhyme in the stanza's makes it almost musical, good job!
(oh, and and thx for all the reviews! see? im returning the favor _)

I like it

that's really interesting to think about: dreams are nothing but intuition

*claps* much better than the other ones cause its longer i love this one!

First, thanks for reviewing me!

Second, I thought this was a really good poem...and for some reason, the line "Dreams are nothing but intuition" was especially groovy to me.

Third, I only had one problem...the use of ellipses (...) should only be 3 periods...sorry about that...I'm obsessive about things like that though.

But it was a good poem, and I liked it a lot.

Lucky

Excellent depiction of hope and love.

so you do use rhyme schemes... this was an enjoyable read. it makes me think0)

lol reading sure is fun :) and yes i just broke up... thanks for yuor concern..

your poems are very deep, im having to think a lot when i read them. this is good ;)

Very cool ideas and writing

Simon

aw, this is so sweet...love the last line.

lyv