|Reviews for Everlasting Dreams|
| Lhune 10/31/06 . chapter 1
Today 2006 and this one dates from 2003...
It's been a while since you wrote this.
Still, I think it very good
even though I can see the improvement you made...
Both are you
(that sounded strange)
It is true I think
-love cannot be erased-
I wish it to be true...
sadly it can be (almost) forgotten.
I'm happy you still present us your works today -smile-
| A Boy Gone Mad 2/14/06 . chapter 1
I liked the line "Dreams are nothing but intuition" - that could be a poem within itself.
| Don'tGiveUpSoSoon 9/25/05 . chapter 1
AWESOME! Really good. great use of words!
| Nanners 10/29/04 . chapter 1
*shivers* (Don't worry, the good kind of shivers!)
This is just really cool. "Love cannot be erased" is a really good line, and it's so true.
| joie 610 7/15/04 . chapter 1
that was nice :) pretty and hopeful ;)
"dreams are nothing but intuition"
| A Chroi 4/5/04 . chapter 1
| TygirSky 4/4/04 . chapter 1
I like how this one is structured, and the rhyme in the stanza's makes it almost musical, good job!
(oh, and and thx for all the reviews! see? im returning the favor _)
| The L1zard Queen 2/5/04 . chapter 1
I like it
| cookeeemonster 10/31/03 . chapter 1
that's really interesting to think about: dreams are nothing but intuition
| Drizzen 10/30/03 . chapter 1
*claps* much better than the other ones cause its longer i love this one!
| Tiadaria 10/21/03 . chapter 1
First, thanks for reviewing me!
Second, I thought this was a really good poem...and for some reason, the line "Dreams are nothing but intuition" was especially groovy to me.
Third, I only had one problem...the use of ellipses (...) should only be 3 periods...sorry about that...I'm obsessive about things like that though.
But it was a good poem, and I liked it a lot.
| burp 10/14/03 . chapter 1
Excellent depiction of hope and love.
| swift sky silver 10/6/03 . chapter 1
so you do use rhyme schemes... this was an enjoyable read. it makes me think0)
| Simon James 10/3/03 . chapter 1
lol reading sure is fun :) and yes i just broke up... thanks for yuor concern..
your poems are very deep, im having to think a lot when i read them. this is good ;)
Very cool ideas and writing
| godawful teen-angst poetry 10/2/03 . chapter 1
aw, this is so sweet...love the last line.